Chamara Janaka
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I wrote the following sentence in an essay.My teacher said, the part I have highlighted, is not clear. Can someone please tell how it should be corrected.
Essay Topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things. Others,however think that change is a good thing. Discuss.
Due to hectic life styles of people in modern society, people often tend to look at their lives in a financial perspective, while being stuck in doing the same work every day.
Essay Topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things. Others,however think that change is a good thing. Discuss.
Due to hectic life styles of people in modern society, people often tend to look at their lives in a financial perspective, while being stuck in doing the same work every day.