alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
John busied himself with his phone as the secretary made the call. She hung up. "You can go now, sir," she said waving her hand.
He entered her office suite which was bigger than his entire flat. It was empty. "In here," she shouted from a room in the corner. John took uncertain towards the door, knocking twice gently. "Come in," she yelled.
Opening the door, he found her on treadmill. A light sheen of sweat was trickling down on her arms and thighs. "My schedule is tight today. Let's get this over with. Who is the investor," she asked, swallowing water from a light green bottle.
John busied himself with his phone as the secretary made the call. She hung up. "You can go now, sir," she said waving her hand.
He entered her office suite which was bigger than his entire flat. It was empty. "In here," she shouted from a room in the corner. John took uncertain towards the door, knocking twice gently. "Come in," she yelled.
Opening the door, he found her on treadmill. A light sheen of sweat was trickling down on her arms and thighs. "My schedule is tight today. Let's get this over with. Who is the investor," she asked, swallowing water from a light green bottle.