alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
John arrived home, exhausted. He felt like he'd been in state of constant daze. He took a bottle of wine from the cabinet and took a long swig. He felt empty inside and decided to fill the hole with the entire bottle of Burgundy. A few hours later, he crumpled on the couch, murmuring to the empty room. He was roused with the incessant sound of the door bell. Opening the door, he saw a medium-height silhouette under the halo of the hallway lamp. The figure stepped inside the house and said, "May I come in?"
"I'm drunk as hell but I think you are already inside my house," answered John. Even through his wine-induced haze, he could see how beautiful this woman was.
John arrived home, exhausted. He felt like he'd been in state of constant daze. He took a bottle of wine from the cabinet and took a long swig. He felt empty inside and decided to fill the hole with the entire bottle of Burgundy. A few hours later, he crumpled on the couch, murmuring to the empty room. He was roused with the incessant sound of the door bell. Opening the door, he saw a medium-height silhouette under the halo of the hallway lamp. The figure stepped inside the house and said, "May I come in?"
"I'm drunk as hell but I think you are already inside my house," answered John. Even through his wine-induced haze, he could see how beautiful this woman was.