alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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John and Emily slept in a pink hammock on the beach, the gentle murmur of the lake crooning them a lullaby. The dawn chorus from the jungle behind woke John. He caressed her hair, watching the rising sun illuminate her snow white, immaculate skin. He began to run his fingers down her back as if he was touching a handmade carpet.
John and Emily slept in a pink hammock on the beach, the gentle murmur of the lake crooning them a lullaby. The dawn chorus from the jungle behind woke John. He caressed her hair, watching the rising sun illuminate her snow white, immaculate skin. He began to run his fingers down her back as if he was touching a handmade carpet.
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