alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
Jimmy carried on as if everything were normal. He kicked down all those fears and doubts like he was trying to push more dirty clothes inside a washing a machine than it could take. A part of him actually believed that beyond all that suffering and misery, a decent life, a happy one, awaited him. A more rational part knew that things were gonna get worse before they got even worse. The despair and fear he tried to push down kept crawling back up preventing him from focusing on his job.
Jimmy carried on as if everything were normal. He kicked down all those fears and doubts like he was trying to push more dirty clothes inside a washing a machine than it could take. A part of him actually believed that beyond all that suffering and misery, a decent life, a happy one, awaited him. A more rational part knew that things were gonna get worse before they got even worse. The despair and fear he tried to push down kept crawling back up preventing him from focusing on his job.