alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
Jane stepped on the balcony, gazing upward. Thin ribbons of clouds streaked the sky, backlit by the orange glow of the setting sun. She stumbled back to the bedroom and lay on the half-empty bed, her black hair splayed across the cream sheet. She sank into a reverie, reminiscing about her days with Patrick.
Jane stepped on the balcony, gazing upward. Thin ribbons of clouds streaked the sky, backlit by the orange glow of the setting sun. She stumbled back to the bedroom and lay on the half-empty bed, her black hair splayed across the cream sheet. She sank into a reverie, reminiscing about her days with Patrick.