It represented service income provided by the director ...

[theol]

It represented service income provided by the director which based on the actual cost incurred by him with 5% mark-up charged to its 6 group companies.

Is that sentence grammatically correct?

Thanks

 

[GoesStation]

Re: Is this sentence grammatically correct?

No. The first part needs a couple of commas and has, I suspect, an extraneous word that makes the second part nonsense. Do you mean this?

It represented service income provided by the director, based on the actual cost incurred by him, with a 5% markup charged to the six companies in the group.

 

[Rover_KE]

Please note that I have changed your thread title.

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[Tdol]

Re: Is this sentence grammatically correct?

service income generated by the director?