It is better that the suhoor does not contain a large amount of sugar or salt

[Mona Ibrahim]

Please help to check the below sentences and if there is any grammatical issue.

It is better that the suhoor does not contain a large amount of sugar or salt, because sugar leads to hunger and salt leads to thirst.

 

[5jj]

For those who do not know what this is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suhur

 

[Mona Ibrahim]

For those who do not know what this is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suhur

Can you please help to check the above sentence and let me if it has any issues.

 

[probus]

Apart from the fact that many people will not know what suhoor is (I didn't), your sentence is fine. In writing for an English-speaking audience you'd be well-advised to include a brief explanation.

 

[teechar]

Please help to check the sentences below sentences and if there is fix any grammatical mistakes you find. issue.

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