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I make an essay by myself to improve my writting skill. I appreaciate if you read and correct those misktakes for me.
Topic: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than a big city. I afraid that I can’t agree with this statement. Children will totally develop themselves in a big city because of advantages. They will have a better facilities for education, have an opportunity to learn in high-quality teaching method and better live condition, services.
Facilities are very important for education. In a big city, children can enjoy a high standard of education, modern libraries, parks and many others technological services. Furthermore, there are a lot of aptitude learning center so children can choose what they want to learn like attending musical or art school…It will be helpful for them to have more chance to make a good career and succeed.
In a big city, children will be educated by qualified teacher graduating from university. There are many international school with international education standard. They define the schoolbook base on pupil-driven, student are practiced more than learning theory. They also promote self-learning of student and help them develop their learning skill.
Beside of developing basic knowledges in school, they need to learn more about social knowledges and how to communicate with others. In big city, there are a lot of commercial centers, supermarkets, restaurants, and entertainment centers where they have opportunities to entertain, communicate with a lot of people. It help them get more confident in a group.
To conclusion, children should be grown up in a big city. The plenty of opportunities offered by a big cities help children to find what they really like and they can develop their knowledge and their skill in the best condition. Moreover, city environment also help them getting more confident in communication.
Topic: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than a big city. I afraid that I can’t agree with this statement. Children will totally develop themselves in a big city because of advantages. They will have a better facilities for education, have an opportunity to learn in high-quality teaching method and better live condition, services.
Facilities are very important for education. In a big city, children can enjoy a high standard of education, modern libraries, parks and many others technological services. Furthermore, there are a lot of aptitude learning center so children can choose what they want to learn like attending musical or art school…It will be helpful for them to have more chance to make a good career and succeed.
In a big city, children will be educated by qualified teacher graduating from university. There are many international school with international education standard. They define the schoolbook base on pupil-driven, student are practiced more than learning theory. They also promote self-learning of student and help them develop their learning skill.
Beside of developing basic knowledges in school, they need to learn more about social knowledges and how to communicate with others. In big city, there are a lot of commercial centers, supermarkets, restaurants, and entertainment centers where they have opportunities to entertain, communicate with a lot of people. It help them get more confident in a group.
To conclusion, children should be grown up in a big city. The plenty of opportunities offered by a big cities help children to find what they really like and they can develop their knowledge and their skill in the best condition. Moreover, city environment also help them getting more confident in communication.