Is this well written: We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before check-in

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Is this well written:

We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before check-in; the apartment was clean and well kept. The location was good, only a few blocks away from the center of XJH, and that was exactly where we needed to be. Only inconvenience was the bathroom is outside of the apartment, it's actually in the hallway that leads to the stairwell, so we had to go through the main entrance in the freezing cold to use the bathroom. Other than that, everything was pretty good.

 

[tedmc]

We agreed to switch to another apartment a day before check-in; the apartment was clean and well kept. The location was good, only a few blocks away from the center of XJH, and that was exactly where we needed to be. The only inconvenience was that the bathroom[STRIKE] is [/STRIKE] was outside [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] the apartment. It's [STRIKE]actually in[/STRIKE] accessible from the hallway that leads to the stairwell, so using it was somewhat of a chore, because we had to [STRIKE]leave[/STRIKE] go out through the main entrance in the freezing cold to use the bathroom. Other than that, everything was pretty good.

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[B45]

Any other suggestions? I've rewritten the last part.

 

[emsr2d2]

I would have made the same corrections as tedmc.