Is this sentence gramatically correct? (please answer fast)

[danny777]

I was a good student, thus being noted for my good knowledge.

Please correct this sentence if it is incorrect. Thanks in advance!!

 

[Barb_D]

The phrase "good knowledge" doesn't work, and I'm not sure what you mean by "being noted."

(Please don't write "Please answer fast" - Even with your please and thank you (which I appreciate) it still comes across as demanding of the people who give their time freely.)

 

[billmcd]

I was a good student, [STRIKE]thus being [/STRIKE]noted for my [STRIKE]good[/STRIKE] knowledge.

Please correct this sentence if it is incorrect. Thanks in advance!!

b.

 

[danny777]

Ok. Leave aside the phrase 'good knowledge'.
There's a phrase ,'be noted for', which means: known by many people,especially because of particular qualities (It is written in the dictionary). And I simply used 'thus' instead of 'that's why'. Is it still incorrect?
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@Barb_D : Ok. You are right! I won't do it again

 

[Barb_D]

You could say "and thus, I am noted for my depth of knowledge."

Is that more or less what you want to say?

 

[danny777]

yes.