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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to request more information on your university and the steps I can take to meet your universities expectations.
First, I would like to inform you about my academics and where I am currently in my junior year at XXX Highschool in Knoxville, Tennessee. Freshman year I did not do terrible, B and C's mostly. I took honors English and honors World history then regular biology and regular algebra 1. My sophomore year I took honors English and AP government and then again regular geometry and regular chemistry. I, in my opinion am more strong in the English and history field. I was doing pretty good in my classes until November of my first semester. my best friend died early November which took a huge toll on me to where I missed a whole week and even days after that randomly. My grades dropped tremendously. For a good while into second semester, and even now, I dealt with a depression that took away my will to want to continue doing well and try in my classes. Overall my sophomore year was a bust. I am currently still in my first semester of my junior year with A's and B's and a C in math. I have dropped down to all regular classes just for the fact I needed a break for myself mentally. I do plan on going back up to honors and AP classes next year. As of right now I have about a 3.2 GPA and will be taking the ACT in December where I aim for 27 or higher.
Second, I want to inform you on my non-academic extra curricular. I am greatly involved with my church and have been ever since I was in 3rd grade. I do not currently play sports but I have played soccer, and have ridden horses competitively for all of my life except this year. I do plan on either getting back to riding horses or trying out for my schools soccer team next school year. I have been employed for a year and a half at XXXX where I am a greeter.
Third, I am extremely interested in being a lawyer and studying law at your university. I have wanted to be a lawyer ever since I was a child. My dream college was University of Georgia until recently when I came to visit a friend at your university and just loved the community and the whole layout of the campus.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
XXX XXX
I am writing this to request more information on your university and the steps I can take to meet your universities expectations.
First, I would like to inform you about my academics and where I am currently in my junior year at XXX Highschool in Knoxville, Tennessee. Freshman year I did not do terrible, B and C's mostly. I took honors English and honors World history then regular biology and regular algebra 1. My sophomore year I took honors English and AP government and then again regular geometry and regular chemistry. I, in my opinion am more strong in the English and history field. I was doing pretty good in my classes until November of my first semester. my best friend died early November which took a huge toll on me to where I missed a whole week and even days after that randomly. My grades dropped tremendously. For a good while into second semester, and even now, I dealt with a depression that took away my will to want to continue doing well and try in my classes. Overall my sophomore year was a bust. I am currently still in my first semester of my junior year with A's and B's and a C in math. I have dropped down to all regular classes just for the fact I needed a break for myself mentally. I do plan on going back up to honors and AP classes next year. As of right now I have about a 3.2 GPA and will be taking the ACT in December where I aim for 27 or higher.
Second, I want to inform you on my non-academic extra curricular. I am greatly involved with my church and have been ever since I was in 3rd grade. I do not currently play sports but I have played soccer, and have ridden horses competitively for all of my life except this year. I do plan on either getting back to riding horses or trying out for my schools soccer team next school year. I have been employed for a year and a half at XXXX where I am a greeter.
Third, I am extremely interested in being a lawyer and studying law at your university. I have wanted to be a lawyer ever since I was a child. My dream college was University of Georgia until recently when I came to visit a friend at your university and just loved the community and the whole layout of the campus.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
XXX XXX
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