rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
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- Chinese
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- China
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- China
Hi everyone, is there any mistake in this writing? This is just a writing practice , not an assignment or anything like that. I'm grateful for any contribution. Thank you so much.
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The idea of creating micro-bots was easy in comparison to creating a redesign of living cells. To do the former, you just had to make very small pieces and assemble them, which at a microscopic level was not easy, but, it was simple. The latter, on the other hand, meant decoding DNA and then recoding it to do something more efficiently, a gargantuan task. Rui had not even discovered DNA yet. So, Rui chose the easier task of creating micro-bots first; though he did, of course, continue to study the mechanics of biology. The study of biology helped him to come up with ideas for the functions of the micro-bots, so there was no risk of wasted time if biology itself became a dead end. Rui recorded all his work on crystal disks so that Yang could review his work and perhaps offer suggestions. Yang commented. “Rui, you and your work amaze me. I am a scientist and an inventor, but I doubt I could have come up with these ideas, let alone worked out how to do them”. Rui laughed. “Of course you wouldn’t, necessity is the mother of invention, and unlike me, you don’t need to reduce your brain size”.
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The idea of creating micro-bots was easy in comparison to creating a redesign of living cells. To do the former, you just had to make very small pieces and assemble them, which at a microscopic level was not easy, but, it was simple. The latter, on the other hand, meant decoding DNA and then recoding it to do something more efficiently, a gargantuan task. Rui had not even discovered DNA yet. So, Rui chose the easier task of creating micro-bots first; though he did, of course, continue to study the mechanics of biology. The study of biology helped him to come up with ideas for the functions of the micro-bots, so there was no risk of wasted time if biology itself became a dead end. Rui recorded all his work on crystal disks so that Yang could review his work and perhaps offer suggestions. Yang commented. “Rui, you and your work amaze me. I am a scientist and an inventor, but I doubt I could have come up with these ideas, let alone worked out how to do them”. Rui laughed. “Of course you wouldn’t, necessity is the mother of invention, and unlike me, you don’t need to reduce your brain size”.