Is my pronunciation or reading good?

[mohammedabo]

Is my pronunciation or reading good?
Did I read "I am' and "orange" in a right way?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1iHNlhe0588&feature=youtu.be

 

[teechar]

Is my pronunciation or reading good?

It's understandable, but there's definitely room for improvement, and the best way to do that is plenty of practice involving listening to and emulating native speakers.

Did I read "I am' and "orange" [STRIKE]in a[/STRIKE] the right way?

Your "I am" is fine, but "orange" sounds a bit like oorange.
You can listen to native English pronunciation of words on plenty of reputable dictionary websites and on www.forvo.com