Polyester
Senior Member
- Joined
- Apr 29, 2014
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Recently, I go to cinema to watch the excited film. I go to buy a ticket in the counter.
And then, when the movie finished, I left the cinema and dial my phone to my friend.
Hello, Peter.
P: Hello, Polyester, what's the hell on earth?
me: I just finished the movie in the cinema. It's excited. I love it. I want to recommend to you.
P:Hey, friend. Don't do that. You knew I lost my job three days ago. I haven't enough money to spending on it. I also not interesting in it.
I spent my whole time to find a job. If you are my best friend, you should advice me to find a job.
me: OKOK. I try to help you and find you next week.
My question is "Is my story correct and grammatical ?:shock:
And then, when the movie finished, I left the cinema and dial my phone to my friend.
Hello, Peter.
P: Hello, Polyester, what's the hell on earth?
me: I just finished the movie in the cinema. It's excited. I love it. I want to recommend to you.
P:Hey, friend. Don't do that. You knew I lost my job three days ago. I haven't enough money to spending on it. I also not interesting in it.
I spent my whole time to find a job. If you are my best friend, you should advice me to find a job.
me: OKOK. I try to help you and find you next week.
My question is "Is my story correct and grammatical ?:shock: