Invitation for meet up

[Yueehs]

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Dear Sarah,

Thanks for coming for the first interview. We enjoyed listening to your story and wish to know more about you.

After some discussion with the management, my directors decide to meet up with you in our office at the following details:

Date: 29 July 2021 (Thu)
Time: 2.30pm
Location: 51st Pandan Road, 02-00, 128453.

Kindly reply to this email to acknowledge.

 

[Yankee]

Hi, I would appreciate it if someone can help me by editing this email.


Dear Sarah,

Thanks for [STRIKE]coming for[/STRIKE] visiting us for the first interview. We enjoyed [STRIKE]listening to[/STRIKE] hearing your story and [STRIKE]wish[/STRIKE] would like to know more about you.

[STRIKE]After some discussion with the management, my[/STRIKE] Our directors [STRIKE]decide[/STRIKE] would like to meet [STRIKE]up[/STRIKE] with you in our office at the [STRIKE]following details[/STRIKE] date and time indicated:

Date: 29 July 2021 (Thu)
Time: 2.30pm
Location: 51st Pandan Road, 02-00, 128453.

[STRIKE]Kindly reply to this email to acknowledge[/STRIKE] Please advise if you can attend. Thank you.

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