internet usage

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keannu

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Title : The problem of using the internet.
Students use the Internet.
Entering the 21st century, the Internet developed. Many students use the Internet and can make friends on the Internet. Is it right for teenagers to use the Internet like this? The Internet has quite a lot of provocative writings or videos. It is stimulating even for adults and is not suitable for students. You can easily be fooled by unknown writings and videos. As a way to prevent this, the app itself must block the site, but it is difficult to prevent it as much as it is used all over the world.
Therefore, measures taken include acquiring and erasing specific words or optional models in photos so that AI recognizes them.
However, since this is also a false deletion, inquiries for re-uploading of the app are accumulated.
But this is not the only problem. As times change, new generations of students cannot find keywords to find inappropriate posts as before.
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Please correct any mistakes, especially the underlined parts.
 
You could start by fixing the first sentence IMO.
 
Please edit your post so that there is an empty line after the title and between paragraphs.
 
The internet was created in 1969. (The world wide web didn't come about until 1990.)
 
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