[Grammar] Information technology dominates across the board

[hemal]

Information technology dominates across the board. Its presence is everywhere, be it our dwelling, a corporate house, an educational institute to name a few. We are counting on it every now and then. The million-dollar question is why it is so important? The obvious answer is it makes our life very comfortable. We use e-commerce websites to buy whatever products we want. We listen to melodious music on the internet in our leisure time.
We use e-mail services like Gmail, Yahoo mail, etc. to send messages or chat to communicate quickly with our colleagues and well-wishers. It is a legitimate and safe mode of communication. In this way we establish an online identity for an individual, corporate, or institute that will be used by many people across the globe.



Please, suggest any grammatical errors and say if it is meaningful or not.

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

at home, in a business, or at school

 

[tedmc]

We are counting on it every now and then.

We use it all the time.

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

In this way we establish an online identity for an individual, a corporation, or an institution that is known around the world.