"In the future, although the garden in front of the home and two of the study rooms will remain unchanged, the bathroom will be made smaller and..."

[hardyweineberg]

This sentence is from my essay.

A) "In the future, although the garden in front of the home and two of the study rooms will remain unchanged, the bathroom will be made smaller and moved closer to the entrance, the living room will be destroyed, and the length of the study room in the upper right corner will be reduced, making way for a longer and bigger study/bedroom in the upper left corner."

B) "In the future, although the garden in front of the home and two of the study rooms will remain unchanged, the bathroom will be made smaller and moved closer to the entrance, the living room will be destroyed, and the length of the study room in the upper right corner will be reduced, all of which will make way for a longer and bigger study/bedroom in the upper left corner."

1) Is there anything wrong with making long sentences like this?
2) Can I say "something will be moved closer to..."?
3) Is it grammatical to use "all of which" in that way?

 

[Tarheel]

There's nothing wrong with long sentences as long as people understand what you're saying.

Do you really need to use "In the future" there?
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I would start off by saying I'm going to do a major renovation.