hardyweineberg
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These sentences are from my essay.
"In terms of Americanos, cappuccinos, decaf coffees, iced coffees, and cafe lattes, in 2015, Club Coffee sold more of these coffees than Espresso Express did: each week, Club Coffee sold about 140 cafe lattes, 110 cappuccinos, 100 Americanos, 75 decaf coffees, and 70 iced coffees, while Espresso Express sold approximately 120 cafe lattes, 60 cappuccinos, 75 Americanos, 50 decaf coffees, and 45 iced coffees."
1) Did I use "in terms of" correctly?
2) Is it wrong to capitalize "Americanos"?
3) Did I use "while" grammatically?
"In terms of Americanos, cappuccinos, decaf coffees, iced coffees, and cafe lattes, in 2015, Club Coffee sold more of these coffees than Espresso Express did: each week, Club Coffee sold about 140 cafe lattes, 110 cappuccinos, 100 Americanos, 75 decaf coffees, and 70 iced coffees, while Espresso Express sold approximately 120 cafe lattes, 60 cappuccinos, 75 Americanos, 50 decaf coffees, and 45 iced coffees."
1) Did I use "in terms of" correctly?
2) Is it wrong to capitalize "Americanos"?
3) Did I use "while" grammatically?