Anna232
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I divided my response why it is important to study art in our time into different parts. I tried to correct them myself. I didn't change the third sentence. Are my corrections right? I didn't change *expand vision*. I left the parts that I think are correct.
1.In my opinion art is important because it expands our vision of life and allows us to better understand other people.
In my opinion art is important because it expands our vision of life and allows us to understand other people better.
2. Also, art dips us in wonderful world of beauty . We can see the results of imagination of other people.
Also, art dips us *into* *a* wonderful world of beauty. We can see the results of imagination of other people.
3.Art has been one of the biggest parts of people's life at all times.
4.It is important to contunue art development in our time.
It is important to contunue the development of art in our time.
1.In my opinion art is important because it expands our vision of life and allows us to better understand other people.
In my opinion art is important because it expands our vision of life and allows us to understand other people better.
2. Also, art dips us in wonderful world of beauty . We can see the results of imagination of other people.
Also, art dips us *into* *a* wonderful world of beauty. We can see the results of imagination of other people.
3.Art has been one of the biggest parts of people's life at all times.
4.It is important to contunue art development in our time.
It is important to contunue the development of art in our time.