[General] I'm using the Big Data anaylsis to....

[Silverobama]

My friend Chris said he's now using the Big Data to study customers' driving behavior because he's working in a company. And Victor added that in China many companies use Big Data to find customers.

I jokingly said "I'm using Big Data ayalysis to find the most compatible woman for me as my future girlfriend".

Is my italic sentence natural?

Edited:

Big Data is a term that describes the large volume of data – both structured and unstructured – that inundates a business on a day-to-day basis. (Source: definition of Big Data)

I want my sentence to mean "I'm using a large volume of information (here refers to young women who are compatible with me) to find the best suitable woman to date".

I wonder if my italic sentence is natural.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

First, please use the Edit Post facility to correct "custmoers'" and "compatiable".

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

... then capitalise Big Data and tell us what it's about.

 

[Silverobama]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

Sorry for the inconvenience, emsr2d2 and Rover. I already corrected my mistakes.

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

You still need to capitalise Big Data three more times (including in the title) and tell us what it's about.

 

[Silverobama]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

You still need to capitalise Big Data three more times (including in the title) and tell us what it's about.

Is it okay now?

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

Yes.

Your italicised sentence is natural.

 

[Silverobama]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

Yes.

Your italicised sentence is natural.

I appreciate your help, Rover.

I wonder if I can rule out some words to make the sentence simpler. Here's my attempt:

I'm using Big Data [STRIKE]ayalysis[/STRIKE] to find the most compatible woman [STRIKE]for me[/STRIKE] as my future girlfriend.

 

[GoesStation]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

I wonder if I can [STRIKE]rule[/STRIKE] strike out some words to make the sentence simpler.

"Rule out" means remove from consideration.

 

[Silverobama]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

"Rule out" means remove from consideration.

I want to shorten my sentence to make it clear and natural. I think I can strike out some words. Would you please help me, GS?

 

[GoesStation]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

I want to shorten my sentence to make it clear and natural. I think I can strike out some words. Would you please help me, GS?

I'm using Big Data analysis to find the perfect girlfriend. I removed compatible because that's an obvious attribute of a perfect girlfriend. You don't need woman if you're a grown man because your girlfriend is obviously going to be one. I dropped future because it adds nothing; if you're trying to find the perfect girlfriend, it's obvious you don't have one now.

 

[Silverobama]

Re: I'm using the big data anaylsis to....

I'm using Big Data analysis to find the perfect girlfriend. I removed compatible because that's an obvious attribute of a perfect girlfriend. You don't need woman if you're a grown man because your girlfriend is obviously going to be one. I dropped future because it adds nothing; if you're trying to find the perfect girlfriend, it's obvious you don't have one now.

I appreciate your perfect understanding of the context and your help and kindness, GS.