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I have chosen an IELTS practice writing topic. Please check the essay and correct any mistakes. Please also let me know any part of it could be more concise.
Topic: It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that money should be spent on constructing modern buildings instead of restoring old buildings. However, I disagree with this idea because the benefits of conserving existing buildings on the economy, environment, and public health are considerable.
Conserving buildings creates fewer pollutants than building new ones does. Both demolition and construction will produce a huge amount of industrial waste, and it damages the environment. The government have to put extra resources into processing toxic pollutants. If we keep old buildings, it saves costs on preserving the environment. In addition, people don’t need to throw away the furniture if they can stay at their original places. Some furniture such as bunk beds are not secure after reassembling.
Another benefit is that when pollutants are fewer, people’s health is better. During construction, air pollution is serious, and it especially affects people living around. If we keep building new buildings, people may have long-term health issues such as asthma, and this will add burdens on the governments ‘medical costs. Also, if people are not healthy, their productivity is low. Some talented professionals may emigrate to another country for a better living environment. All these negative impacts will affect the economy of a country.
In conclusion, it’s more economical to conserve buildings. Although money spent on repairing old buildings is expensive, the costs of protecting the environment and public health cannot be neglected.
Topic: It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that money should be spent on constructing modern buildings instead of restoring old buildings. However, I disagree with this idea because the benefits of conserving existing buildings on the economy, environment, and public health are considerable.
Conserving buildings creates fewer pollutants than building new ones does. Both demolition and construction will produce a huge amount of industrial waste, and it damages the environment. The government have to put extra resources into processing toxic pollutants. If we keep old buildings, it saves costs on preserving the environment. In addition, people don’t need to throw away the furniture if they can stay at their original places. Some furniture such as bunk beds are not secure after reassembling.
Another benefit is that when pollutants are fewer, people’s health is better. During construction, air pollution is serious, and it especially affects people living around. If we keep building new buildings, people may have long-term health issues such as asthma, and this will add burdens on the governments ‘medical costs. Also, if people are not healthy, their productivity is low. Some talented professionals may emigrate to another country for a better living environment. All these negative impacts will affect the economy of a country.
In conclusion, it’s more economical to conserve buildings. Although money spent on repairing old buildings is expensive, the costs of protecting the environment and public health cannot be neglected.
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