I was informed that the bag from LV......

[output]

Are the following sentence correct and natural?


I was informed that a bag from LV will be arriving for me on 11 Dec 2023. Could you please receive it for me and keep it until I will be back?

 

[emsr2d2]

Are the following sentences correct and natural?

I was informed that a bag from LV will be arriving for me on 11 Dec 2023. Could you please receive accept it for me and keep it until I will be I am/I get back?

As long as the person you're sending it to knows what "LV" means, then yes (with my corrections).

 

[output]

LV = Louis Votton, fashion brand.

 

[Rover_KE]

You probably mean "Louis Vuitton".

 

[tedmc]

I was wondering whether "a bag will be arriving for me" is correct. It sounds odd to me. I would write "...a bag sent/delivered to me will be arriving on 11 Dec 2023".

 

[Piscean]

I was wondering whether "a bag will be arriving for me" is correct.

It's fine.

I would write "...a bag sent/delivered to me will be arriving on 11 Dec 2023".

The 'sent to me' seems unnecessary.