[Essay] I want to start up the doll selling

[Efremova0901]

I want to make selling announcement. Does this sound natural?

I offer an exclusive gift made from Spain specially for you.
It can be engraved with a name or memorable date or any other inscription you like.
Variety of colors is available.
Make a unique present for you or friend.
Order in advance so that you can be prepared for Holidays.

 

[teechar]

Hello, and welcome.

selling announcement.

What do you mean by that, and how do you intend to use it?

I offer an exclusive gift made [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] in Spain specially for you.
It can be engraved with a name, [STRIKE]or memorable[/STRIKE] date or any other inscription you like.
[STRIKE]Variety of colors is[/STRIKE] Available in a variety of colours.
[STRIKE]Make[/STRIKE] A unique [STRIKE]present[/STRIKE] gift for you or your friend.

See above.

Order in advance so that you can be prepared for holidays.

That's unnatural, and I don't think it's necessary.

 

[Efremova0901]

That's unnatural, and I don't think it's necessary.

Thank you so much for editing! I just want to use an encouraging phrase to buy my product :lol:
Can I say "kindly remind you to make an order in advance" instead?

 

[tedmc]

Thank you so much for editing! I just want to use an encouraging phrase to buy my product :lol:
Can I say "kindly remind you to make an order in advance" instead?

That does not sound natural.
Perhaps: Order early to avoid disappointment (as stock is limited).

A selling announcement is an advertisement.

 

[emsr2d2]

What does your title mean and what does it have to do with the thread? The word "doll" appears nowhere in your post.