I want little bit of blue sky

[alpacinou]

Is this good?

I miss my old life. I want little bit of blue sky, a little bit of fresh breeze. I want some crisp air, some walk in the field. I want some birds singing, some tree branches swaying.

 

[emsr2d2]

There's a word missing near the start of sentence 2. Can you work out what you have omitted?
Also, you have a singular where you should have a plural in sentence 3.

 

[alpacinou]

There's a word missing near the start of sentence 2. Can you work out what you have omitted?
Also, you have a singular where you should have a plural in sentence 3.

I miss my old life. I want a little bit of blue sky, a little bit of fresh breeze. I want some crisp air, some walks in the field. I want some birds singing, some tree branches swaying.

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

I want to hear birds singing, hear tree branches swaying.