Silverobama
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- Joined
- Aug 8, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi.
I wonder if my sentence is natural.
Context: I am now in a mountain resort and have stayed here for more than 40 days, half of the summer vacation. I use my spare time to pick up rubbish; I do it almost every day. Today I filled another seven bags. I used almost all my plastic bags. I wrote a sentence when posting my picking rubbish online which goes like "I spent half the summer vacation in this mountain resort and picked half of its rubbish". I want to make "two halfs" in my sentence. Of course, I don't necessary need to use that but because I said it in Chinese first, I want to keep it in English.
Please enlighten me and help me with my italic sentence. The following is a picture I took.
I wonder if my sentence is natural.
Context: I am now in a mountain resort and have stayed here for more than 40 days, half of the summer vacation. I use my spare time to pick up rubbish; I do it almost every day. Today I filled another seven bags. I used almost all my plastic bags. I wrote a sentence when posting my picking rubbish online which goes like "I spent half the summer vacation in this mountain resort and picked half of its rubbish". I want to make "two halfs" in my sentence. Of course, I don't necessary need to use that but because I said it in Chinese first, I want to keep it in English.
Please enlighten me and help me with my italic sentence. The following is a picture I took.