silentbranch
Member
- Joined
- Jun 23, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
Hello I am writing an email to a recruiter in order to have a feedback.
Could you kindly check if it is good or if there is something that should be changed? I don't want that my email is a literal translation from the italian.
"Hello ****,
I hope this email finds you well.
I am **** and I had three phone interviews for the ***** role in Milan.
I am contacting you today with regards to the status of my application because I have high expectations for the job position and for the great opportunity to work in ******.
When I applied for the position in the ****'s website on March 31th I really believed that it was the right job I was looking for.
I have dreamed a lot about the big opportunity to work in a field I really like and with a company like *****.
I have dreamed about the opportunity to work in the international and heterogeneous environments that ***** could provide, about the possibility of working in a team with people from different countries, about the idea of travelling around the world and having business in the several *****'s branches in the world.
Look forward to hear from you and I send you best regards. "
Thank you so much for your help
Could you kindly check if it is good or if there is something that should be changed? I don't want that my email is a literal translation from the italian.
"Hello ****,
I hope this email finds you well.
I am **** and I had three phone interviews for the ***** role in Milan.
I am contacting you today with regards to the status of my application because I have high expectations for the job position and for the great opportunity to work in ******.
When I applied for the position in the ****'s website on March 31th I really believed that it was the right job I was looking for.
I have dreamed a lot about the big opportunity to work in a field I really like and with a company like *****.
I have dreamed about the opportunity to work in the international and heterogeneous environments that ***** could provide, about the possibility of working in a team with people from different countries, about the idea of travelling around the world and having business in the several *****'s branches in the world.
Look forward to hear from you and I send you best regards. "
Thank you so much for your help