I know that proofreading requests are not encouraged, but no harm trying?

[NikolaiV]

Hi guys.

So I translated a video clip from Russian into English, but English is not my first language and I wanted to ask native speakers to have a look on the video and say what sounds incorrect or odd to them in my translation.

Here is the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tlzXI1AWzlY

The video is short and fun (though I must admit there is some strong language in it - I guess I'm breaking some forum rules, but at least I've warned everyone.)

Also, there is no problems with copyright, in case anyone is wondering, since I'm the owner of the original content.

Thank you for whatever help you can provide.

 

[Rover_KE]

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