alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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I finally met Jasmine's father outside the hut. The midday sun illuminated his brownish skin, revealing its cracks and creases. He was a rugged country man with a long angular face and, square chin and yellow decaying teeth. The mountain sun had faded the glow off of his hair which was a pale gray.
The air that day was windless and clammy. I could almost feel the moisture in the air merging with my sweat. On a hot, damp day like this, a swimming pool would be a life saver.
I finally met Jasmine's father outside the hut. The midday sun illuminated his brownish skin, revealing its cracks and creases. He was a rugged country man with a long angular face and, square chin and yellow decaying teeth. The mountain sun had faded the glow off of his hair which was a pale gray.
The air that day was windless and clammy. I could almost feel the moisture in the air merging with my sweat. On a hot, damp day like this, a swimming pool would be a life saver.