Glizdka
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I wanted to practise a few words, phrases, and constructions that I'm not sure about by writing this short paragraph. Could you please check my writing?
April thirtieth, 1945. Adolf Hitler kills himself as the Allied and Soviet troops are systematically wrapping up the last strugglers on German soil. What could possibly be going through his head, except for the bullet of course? Was it "I pulled Germany into yet another lost war"? Maybe "They've discovered the death camps along with other attrocities". Perhaps he was afraid he was going to become a muppet-puppet in a mock trial. Was he terrified thinking of the tortures he would be subjected to by the Allies, or worse, the Soviets? Or maybe it was simply something along the lines of "I dun goofed. Better off myself". We will never know; the spattered pieces oh his brain were going to be burned immediatelly along with the rest of the carcass so as to prevent anybody from recognizing him, but at least some of the thoughts above could've been partly responsible for his decision to commit suicide.
April thirtieth, 1945. Adolf Hitler kills himself as the Allied and Soviet troops are systematically wrapping up the last strugglers on German soil. What could possibly be going through his head, except for the bullet of course? Was it "I pulled Germany into yet another lost war"? Maybe "They've discovered the death camps along with other attrocities". Perhaps he was afraid he was going to become a muppet-puppet in a mock trial. Was he terrified thinking of the tortures he would be subjected to by the Allies, or worse, the Soviets? Or maybe it was simply something along the lines of "I dun goofed. Better off myself". We will never know; the spattered pieces oh his brain were going to be burned immediatelly along with the rest of the carcass so as to prevent anybody from recognizing him, but at least some of the thoughts above could've been partly responsible for his decision to commit suicide.
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