Glizdka
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- Joined
- Apr 13, 2019
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- Native Language
- Polish
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- Poland
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- Poland
The following is my own joyful creation.
1. I crossed the road when the cars drove.
2. I was crossing the road when the cars drove.
3. I crossed the road when the cars were driving.
4. I was crossing the road when the cars were driving.
I'm trying to find a sentence in which different combinations of the past simple and the past continuous result in vastly different messages. I want to include an element of danger because it's imaginative. The idea is that 1 is supposed to sound "the safest" of all the four options.
"I crossed the road." - I made it to the other side of the road.
"I was crossing the road." - It is not known whether I did or didn't make it to the other side of the road.
"The cars drove." - The cars had finished driving in front of me, and there were no cars on the road when I commenced crossing.
"The cars were driving." - The cars were still present on the road, swooshing by, when I commenced crossing.
I'm not sure whether these sentences are grammatical and whether they accomplish what I want them to. The fact that there's no real equivalents of the words drive, ride, run, go, or walk in my first language is probably why I'm struggling with these. I've certainly heard that cars drive, so I decided to go with this verb, but it feels odd. I might want to use a preposition (by/past come to my mind), change the verb, completely reword the sentences, or scrap the idea entirely. I need your help.
1. I crossed the road when the cars drove.
2. I was crossing the road when the cars drove.
3. I crossed the road when the cars were driving.
4. I was crossing the road when the cars were driving.
I'm trying to find a sentence in which different combinations of the past simple and the past continuous result in vastly different messages. I want to include an element of danger because it's imaginative. The idea is that 1 is supposed to sound "the safest" of all the four options.
"I crossed the road." - I made it to the other side of the road.
"I was crossing the road." - It is not known whether I did or didn't make it to the other side of the road.
"The cars drove." - The cars had finished driving in front of me, and there were no cars on the road when I commenced crossing.
"The cars were driving." - The cars were still present on the road, swooshing by, when I commenced crossing.
I'm not sure whether these sentences are grammatical and whether they accomplish what I want them to. The fact that there's no real equivalents of the words drive, ride, run, go, or walk in my first language is probably why I'm struggling with these. I've certainly heard that cars drive, so I decided to go with this verb, but it feels odd. I might want to use a preposition (by/past come to my mind), change the verb, completely reword the sentences, or scrap the idea entirely. I need your help.