brianbrian
Junior Member
- Joined
- Aug 1, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- French
- Home Country
- France
- Current Location
- Canada
I am going to make up an example. Let me name a store Great Price.
(1) my original example
I am planning to go to Great Price to buy a particular computer accessory later today. When I am in the store, I spend some time looking for it and find out that it is no longer available.
(2) my restatement
At Great Price, I spend some time looking for a particular accessory which I find out is no longer available.
Is my restatement grammatically correct? Thanks a lot.
(1) my original example
I am planning to go to Great Price to buy a particular computer accessory later today. When I am in the store, I spend some time looking for it and find out that it is no longer available.
(2) my restatement
At Great Price, I spend some time looking for a particular accessory which I find out is no longer available.
Is my restatement grammatically correct? Thanks a lot.