How to make perfect intro of your presentation?

[waseemak25]

Hi, I need your help to write presentation intro in a attractive way.
I have to give a presentation on "Courtesy" which is the part of 7 Cs in communication skills.
I made intro but I think this is not perfect, can someone make it in a perfect way.

"Hi, My name is edina and today i am doing BSCS and today I am here to give presentation on courtesy.
I will try to give my best"

 

[emsr2d2]

Please correct the information in your profile. Both your native language and your current location appear to be incorrect.

 

[waseemak25]

Please correct the information in your profile. Both your native language and your current location appear to be incorrect.

Done Successfully.
Please somebody help me

 

[Tdol]

I wouldn't use Hi- I would use Good morning/afternoon. I would also say and today I am going to give a presentation on courtesy.

 

[GoesStation]

Done Successfully.
Please somebody help me

Something must have gone wrong. Your profile still says your native language is English and your home country and current location are the UK.