[General] How to ask my professor for advice

[Sara9]

Hello everyone,
I hope you all doing well,
I want to write an e-mail my professor( adviser) to kindly ask him for last advice before the discussion session that will be held next week.
Here is my try:
"
Dear Dr.Smith,
I hope you are doing well,
I would greatly appreciate if you kindly give me advice or insights on the discussion session .
I hope the session will be of a great benefit.
I'm anxiously awaiting your response.
Thank you very much for your time and efforts.
Regards,
Sara
"
what do you think?

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello everyone.

I hope you are all doing well. I want to write an e-mail to my professor (adviser) to [STRIKE]kindly[/STRIKE] ask him for [STRIKE]last[/STRIKE] some final advice before the discussion session that will be held next week.

Here is my [STRIKE]try[/STRIKE] attempt:

Dear Dr. Smith,

I hope you are doing well. I would greatly appreciate it if you [STRIKE]kindly[/STRIKE] would give me some advice on or insights [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] into the forthcoming discussion session.
I hope the session will be of [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] great benefit.
[STRIKE]I'm anxiously awaiting[/STRIKE] I look forward to your response.
Thank you very much for your time and efforts.
Regards,
Sara

What do you think? [STRIKE][/STRIKE]

Please look at my corrections above, in red. I think you need to be more specific about the advice you are looking for.