[Vocabulary] How i can imrove the language of the below sentence ( which is little technical)

[johan12102015]

It can be seen from above graph that with increasing cable stiffness maximum lifting height also increases. And also results in larger loads being induced onto the outer casing. Henceforth it is recommended to maintain the smaller loads onto the casing; rigid joint shall not be lifted 12.5 meter for cold cable. Figure 6 shows the model at the maximum lifting height for the Johan1cable with minimum bend stiffness.

 

[teechar]

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