alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Persian
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- Iran
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- Iran
With my corrections, yes. I changed the tense to match the time frame established by the first verb.Is this [STRIKE]fine[/STRIKE] okay?
She was sitting on a sofa … her legs crossed … her hand on the back of the sofa …. She could not have been more relaxed.
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