diamondcutter
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- English Teacher
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- Chinese
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- China
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Michael: Hi, Steve! This is Michael. I’ve got a bad cold. My mother will stay at home with me. Are you interested in her ticket to “The Sound of Music”?
Steve: What a pity! However, I don’t think the movie is interesting. Why not give the ticket to Mr. Brown?
Michael: Great! He must be excited to get it.
Steve: OK, you can tell him the exciting news right now!
Source: Project English 8B, an English textbook for junior high school students in China, Popular Science Press
I don’t think this dialogue is very natural. What do you think my improvement as follows?
Michael: Hi, Steve! This is Michael. I’ve got a bad cold. My mother will stay at home to look after me and she can’t go to the cinema as she planned. Would you like to have her ticket? The film is “The Sound of Music”.
Steve: What a pity! But I don’t think the movie is interesting. Why not give the ticket to Mr. Brown?
Michael: Good idea! He will be excited to get it.
Steve: I think so. You can tell him the exciting news right now!
Steve: What a pity! However, I don’t think the movie is interesting. Why not give the ticket to Mr. Brown?
Michael: Great! He must be excited to get it.
Steve: OK, you can tell him the exciting news right now!
Source: Project English 8B, an English textbook for junior high school students in China, Popular Science Press
I don’t think this dialogue is very natural. What do you think my improvement as follows?
Michael: Hi, Steve! This is Michael. I’ve got a bad cold. My mother will stay at home to look after me and she can’t go to the cinema as she planned. Would you like to have her ticket? The film is “The Sound of Music”.
Steve: What a pity! But I don’t think the movie is interesting. Why not give the ticket to Mr. Brown?
Michael: Good idea! He will be excited to get it.
Steve: I think so. You can tell him the exciting news right now!