alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Her parents sat on the couch, watching the news. Margery walked towards the window. She could see the reflection of her life on the glass. A messy living room. Unfinished meals. And HER PARENTS. David and Rita could care less about her. They wanted a son. For a second, she could see herself opening the window and getting away.
Her parents sat on the couch, watching the news. Margery walked towards the window. She could see the reflection of her life on the glass. A messy living room. Unfinished meals. And HER PARENTS. David and Rita could care less about her. They wanted a son. For a second, she could see herself opening the window and getting away.
