[General] Her brother is very protective of her

[Silverobama]

Hi.

I know a young boy cares his younger sister very much. He protects her from being harm in every cirucumstance. For example, when playing with others, when playing at home, or something like this.

I wonder if my sentence is natural "Her brother is very protective of her".

 

[Rover_KE]

It is, but I've moved your thread here to Editing & Writing Topics because your opening sentences need numerous corrections.

 

[Silverobama]

It is, but I've moved your thread here to Editing & Writing Topics because your opening sentences need numerous corrections.

Her brother is very protective of her.

Do you mean this sentence needs corrections? Or my context?

 

[tedmc]

Hi.

I know a young boy who cares for/about his younger sister very much. He protects her from being harmed (in every circumstance), for example, when she is playing with others, when playing at home, or something like this.

I wonder if my sentence is natural: "Her brother is very protective of her".

See above.

 

[Rover_KE]

Her brother is very protective of her.

Do you mean this sentence needs corrections? Or my context?

As I said in my reply, your opening sentences need corrections.

 

[Tarheel]

Hi.

I know a young boy who cares for his younger sister very much. He protects her from [STRIKE]being[/STRIKE] harm in any cirucumstance. For example, when playing with others, when playing at home, or whatever.

I wonder if my sentence is natural "Her brother is very protective of her".

Yes. It's fine.

 

[tedmc]

Yes. It's fine.

I thought the third sentence os not complete without a verb.

And the second paragraph is not complete without a colon or a dash after "natural".

 

[Silverobama]

As I said in my reply, your opening sentences need corrections.

Does "opening sentences" mean "the context"?

 

[Tarheel]

Does "opening sentences" mean "the context"?

If by that you mean the sentences in the first paragraph, yes. (I missed one thing.)

 

[emsr2d2]

Does "opening sentences" mean "the context"?

No. The "opening sentences" are the first two or three sentences of any piece of writing. They are the sentences that "open" the piece.

 

[Rover_KE]