help with thesis statements

[dominique1219]

instead of insisting on hearing both side lets insist on hearing all sides

 

[Tdol]

It should be let's, but it doesn't work for me as a thesis statement.

 

[emsr2d2]

Instead of insisting on hearing both sides, let's insist on hearing all sides.

Note my corrections above.

 

[Raymott]

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