CodeKadiya
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- Jun 3, 2011
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- Sinhalese
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- Sri Lanka
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- Australia
[FONT="]Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?[/FONT]
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[FONT="]In the present age, education is valued ever so highly that it has become the cornerstone of every nation. Countries have begun restructuring their education system in order to effectively compete with other nations. Most people believe that an outstanding education system is assured to generate significant changes to the development of a country while other are of the opinion that education is not the only factor to improve a nation.[/FONT]
[FONT="]We must acknowledge the fact that a nation with good leaders is impractical if they are unaware of the methods to develop the country. It is often argued that education alone is inadequate to progress a nation. Other skills such as communication and personal relations are equally vital to overcome challenges and move the nation towards advancement. Likewise, there are other means of enhancing a nation’s economy such as exporting goods.[/FONT]
[FONT="]However, many people strongly believe that an exceptional education system is pivotal to rise above other nations. A country with an astounding education system is able to promote tourism, business negotiations and exchange of labour which in turn will effectively craft a significant change to its economy.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Furthermore, powerful nations of the world are constantly on the lookout to magnify its international relationships with other nations that possess a similar educational background. Countries that are looking to be advancing ahead of other nations can also expect powerful nations to assist them financially. As a result, nations can further enhance their education system and eventually create remarkable graduates and businessmen who are well qualified to compete globally.[/FONT]
[FONT="]In summary, I would like to concede that a good education system is extremely critical and has become the only crucial factor to the development of a nation today. Without a profound education system people with lack of knowledge, experience and skill will rule nations unaware of the ways of development. Moreover, scholars, philosophers and other powerful leaders in our history and of the present have all proven to possess an astounding educational background in nations with a pronounced education system.[/FONT]
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[FONT="]Please Grade my Essay. Im doing IELTS. I have done more than 4 times but all the time I get 6.5 for Writing. Can someone help me with the errors I'm dong....[/FONT]
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[FONT="]In the present age, education is valued ever so highly that it has become the cornerstone of every nation. Countries have begun restructuring their education system in order to effectively compete with other nations. Most people believe that an outstanding education system is assured to generate significant changes to the development of a country while other are of the opinion that education is not the only factor to improve a nation.[/FONT]
[FONT="]We must acknowledge the fact that a nation with good leaders is impractical if they are unaware of the methods to develop the country. It is often argued that education alone is inadequate to progress a nation. Other skills such as communication and personal relations are equally vital to overcome challenges and move the nation towards advancement. Likewise, there are other means of enhancing a nation’s economy such as exporting goods.[/FONT]
[FONT="]However, many people strongly believe that an exceptional education system is pivotal to rise above other nations. A country with an astounding education system is able to promote tourism, business negotiations and exchange of labour which in turn will effectively craft a significant change to its economy.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Furthermore, powerful nations of the world are constantly on the lookout to magnify its international relationships with other nations that possess a similar educational background. Countries that are looking to be advancing ahead of other nations can also expect powerful nations to assist them financially. As a result, nations can further enhance their education system and eventually create remarkable graduates and businessmen who are well qualified to compete globally.[/FONT]
[FONT="]In summary, I would like to concede that a good education system is extremely critical and has become the only crucial factor to the development of a nation today. Without a profound education system people with lack of knowledge, experience and skill will rule nations unaware of the ways of development. Moreover, scholars, philosophers and other powerful leaders in our history and of the present have all proven to possess an astounding educational background in nations with a pronounced education system.[/FONT]
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[FONT="]Please Grade my Essay. Im doing IELTS. I have done more than 4 times but all the time I get 6.5 for Writing. Can someone help me with the errors I'm dong....[/FONT]
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