Faten.88
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- United Arab Emirates
I have written a simple play about a crime and I need your help to correct it. This is a part of the play.
Police Officer: What is the matter? why are you hurrying ?Man: Nothing,nothing
Police Officer: Why are you afraid?
Man: There,there are a dead man in the zoo.
Police Officer: Where did you see that?
Man:There in the giraffe cage.
Police Officer: Take us to the place.
((After they arrive to the place))
Police Officer: He died, call the emergency and the inspector.
Doctor: He died by hanging, this is the rope and there is an impact on the body.
Inspector: police,take the evidence to the lab.where is the man who were in the place of the crime?
Man: I am here,sir.
Inspector: Tell us ,what happened exactly?
I can accept any suggestions.
Police Officer: What is the matter? why are you hurrying ?Man: Nothing,nothing
Police Officer: Why are you afraid?
Man: There,there are a dead man in the zoo.
Police Officer: Where did you see that?
Man:There in the giraffe cage.
Police Officer: Take us to the place.
((After they arrive to the place))
Police Officer: He died, call the emergency and the inspector.
Doctor: He died by hanging, this is the rope and there is an impact on the body.
Inspector: police,take the evidence to the lab.where is the man who were in the place of the crime?
Man: I am here,sir.
Inspector: Tell us ,what happened exactly?
I can accept any suggestions.