[Essay] Help me proofread my term paper

[iHateBEL]

Hello guys, could someone help me to proof read my english term paper here? i have to submit it this thursday and i am not very sure if it is correct or not.

i'll send a pm if someone interested to help me. Don't worry it won't be too long and it's just a lower level english

 

[Leandro-Z]

Hello guys, could someone help me to proof read my english term paper here? i have to submit it this thursday and i am not very sure if it is correct or not.

i'll send a pm if someone interested to help me. Don't worry it won't be too long and it's just a lower level english

You are not supposed to ask for something like this here. This forum is available for you to ask meanings, not to ask someone if they can help you do your homework.

Regards, Leandro