Help me please :)

[Van Gerwen Dyon Conradus]

hello Teacher ,
i have a problem i have worked months on a software to sell to better my life but now i have a problem i must write a story about it in the English but im dutch can please please i beg you all check my grammar my thank will be greatfull

This is what you get:
booming 808s, a big library of actual and synth brasses.
High-quality keys for fresh and powerful inspiration.
Many bells and plucks to choose from to pimp your beats.
Trapping leads that will help to boost up your production.
Synth and actual strings to boost up your creativity and many more.
In a top of that every month you get an update with new sounds, so you never run out sounds and fresh inspiration

 

[teechar]

I have a problem. I have worked for months on a music software package to sell to better my life, but now I have a problem. I must write a story about it in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] English, but since I'm dutch can someone please [STRIKE]please i beg you all[/STRIKE] check my grammar? [STRIKE]my thank will[/STRIKE] I would be grateful. [STRIKE]greatfull [/STRIKE]

This is what you get:
- Booming 808s, including a big library of actual and synth brasses.
- High-quality keys for fresh and powerful inspiration.
- Many bells and plucks to choose from to pimp your beats.
- Trapping leads that will help to boost [STRIKE]up[/STRIKE] your production.
- Synth and actual strings and many more to boost [STRIKE]up[/STRIKE] your creativity. [STRIKE]and many more. [/STRIKE]
- On top of that, you get an update with new sounds every month, so you never run out of sounds and fresh inspiration.

I must say that I've never heard of "pimp your beat", nor even of "pump your beat", but if either works in your music niche, then who am I to stop you using them? ;-)

 

[emsr2d2]

You said "I must write a story in English". Is this homework?