alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Harry was dreaming. His ex was in bed with a man with no face. He woke to the patter of rain on the window of his bedroom. Pulling the curtain, he found rivulets of water running down the glass. He stepped out into the garden. The scent of blossoms mingled with the smell of rain, wafting through the crisp air, enchanting Harry. The rain freshened leaves were laden with fat droplets of water looking like diamonds. The flower petals were sprayed with raindrops. Harry was trying to bury the memory of his ex amid this otherworldly garden, but her image kept creeping up in his mind.
Harry was dreaming. His ex was in bed with a man with no face. He woke to the patter of rain on the window of his bedroom. Pulling the curtain, he found rivulets of water running down the glass. He stepped out into the garden. The scent of blossoms mingled with the smell of rain, wafting through the crisp air, enchanting Harry. The rain freshened leaves were laden with fat droplets of water looking like diamonds. The flower petals were sprayed with raindrops. Harry was trying to bury the memory of his ex amid this otherworldly garden, but her image kept creeping up in his mind.