had it roamed around the city by his soldiers.

[tufguy]

There was an invader (king). Who came to India from a Muslim country and killed a lot of people. He also killed his uncle and got his head put on the tip of a spear and had it roamed around the city by his soldiers.

Please check my sentences.

 

[Tdol]

I don't like the transitive use of roamed there. I would change the verb. I would also say that he had his head impaled on a spear- the tip is irrelevant as it is the working part of a spear, but I don't like got there.

 

[tufguy]

I don't like the transitive use of roamed there. I would change the verb. I would also say that he had his head impaled on a spear- the tip is irrelevant as it is the working part of a spear, but I don't like got there.

So what should be used in place of "Roam"?

 

[emsr2d2]

There was an invader (a king) (no full stop here) who came to India from a Muslim country and killed a lot of people. He also killed his uncle, [STRIKE]and got[/STRIKE] put his head [STRIKE]put[/STRIKE] on the tip of a spear and [STRIKE]had it[/STRIKE] made his soldiers [STRIKE]roamed[/STRIKE] parade it around the city. [STRIKE]by his soldiers.[/STRIKE]

Please check my sentences.

See above.

 

[Tarheel]

Tufguy, what country did the invader come from?

 

[tufguy]

Tufguy, what country did the invader come from?

Not sure but I think he came from Turkey seven hundred years ago.