[Resume] Grammar for describing my last position on my resume

[Hulio943]

I described my last position in 4 points. One of the points is:

• Created SQL queries for getting valuable statistical information.

Is the grammar ok here?

 

[emsr2d2]

Change "for getting" to "to obtain". I probably wouldn't bother with "valuable". I don't think most people think you would gather statistical information if it wasn't worth it.

Note that you can write "okay" or "OK" but not "ok".

 

[Yankee]

Change "for getting" to "to obtain". I probably wouldn't bother with "valuable". I don't think most people think you would gather statistical information if it wasn't worth it.

Note that you can write "okay" or "OK" but not "ok".

Or just delete "getting".

 

[Tdol]

How about saying something factual about the queries, which might be more impressive to someone than the adjectives?

Created SQL queries to collect data on xxxx.