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[R.roghani]

Hi dear. I want to improve my writing, bacause i want to take apart in IELTS exam. In this way i do'nt know how can i do it?. People have different openion in this field and when you ask different people, you get different answer which confuse you to select the best way, therefor i decided send an email to you. But how do i find you?. Once that i was surging on the net in instagram one page in explore introduce your page and immediately i searched you site and when i found it, i decided to write my problem as a first paragraph for correcting by your site, and due to this decision i write this for you.with regards. Roozbeh

 

[teechar]

Hi dear.

That's only appropriate between people who are very familiar with each other. Here, there's no need to preface your question/text. Just go ahead and say what you want to say.

I want to improve my writing, because I want to [STRIKE]take apart in[/STRIKE] sit for the IELTS exam, but [STRIKE]In this way[/STRIKE] I don't know how [STRIKE]can i do [/STRIKE] to practise for it. People have different opinions [STRIKE]in this field[/STRIKE] and when you ask different people, you get different answers, which I find confusing. [STRIKE]you to select the best way,[/STRIKE] Therefore, I decided to write this post. [STRIKE]send an email to you. But how do i find you?. Once that i was surging on the net in instagram one page in explore introduce your page and immediately i searched you site and when i found it, i decided to write my problem as a first paragraph for correcting by your site, and due to this decision i write this for you.[/STRIKE] With regards. Roozbeh

You can see from the corrections above that you need to learn a lot of things before you can be ready for IELTS. What is your target score, and when are you planning to sit for the test?

 

[Tdol]

You get different answers because there is no single perfect way to do this- if there were, everyone would be able to do it.

 

[tedmc]

Give me a help.

The title of the thread reflects bad English to start with. I think you really need to go back to the basics of grammar - "countable/uncountable nouns" in this case.