[Grammar] gift

[arya ur]

pls correct it.
i wish to speak about a gift that is someone given to me.we all have the need to be understood and heard.we can release the tension and unexpressed emotions by talking about it with a friend.i think love,loving heart is the best gift to me.give your time and attention,a loving heart does not except anything more than that.love means caring,understanding,support in any circumstance,that will help me to enjoy the life.gift of love from my friends is the valuable thing in my life.

 

[februar]

pls correct it.
I wish to speak about a gift that is [STRIKE]someone[/STRIKE] given to me. We all have the need to be understood and heard. We can release the tension and unexpressed emotions by talking about it with a friend. Therefore, love and a loving heart is the best gift to me. My motto is: “Give the friends your time and attention because a loving heart does not except anything more than that.” Love means caring, understanding, and supporting each other in any circumstances. That is what will help me to enjoy [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] life. A gift of love from my friends is the most valuable thing in my life.

Februar (no teacher)